The Cheshire Cat

First off, let me say how much I am enjoying your story. The characters are well developed, and the storyline intruiging so far. I do have some Critique for you, ...

Kaylyn: To answer your question, I am still in the process of writing (currently in the middle of chapter three). I write as I am inspired (which is often, thank ...

Maki-chan: The term 'Imprinted' will be described in the next chapter. :3 *mwa ha ha ha* Glad that you thought my writing was enjoyable. :D It makes me really happy ...

"*wry smile* I didn't use too, but in light of current events..." - Ebony "Tch. No." -Death "Fate lead Ebony to me. :D" -Edward Which person would you hate to ...

Excellent job, I'm dying for more. I can't think of any crutique for you, but I'd love if you could PM me when you add more chapters! Sorry for the ...

Wow! Excellent job on this story! I'm finding myself being drawn in, and I'll definately check out your other chapters. I just have one little thing you might want to ...

8/10 for humor, points off for unoriginality.

My playlist for Blithe Bereavement ( ) We Were Born For This - Paramore Remedy - Jason Mraz Extreme Ways - Moby Waka Laka - DDR i think One, Two, ...

[s]"Film class. That was about it." - Ebony "You foolish humans should be greatful that your school is as it is today. When I was alive, I had several scholars ...

Chapter 2: In which our heroine dies. “A dying man needs to die, as a sleepy man needs to sleep, and there comes a time when it is wrong, as ...

Awesome job, I love the rebellious feel to it, like you would be shouting it at a rally. It holds a good point as well. If you elaborated on this ...

Thank you all so much for the feedback! I've changed those spelling mistakes - thanks for pointing them out to me. I was having a lot of trouble with 'earge' ...

Exciting, good flow. A really enjoyable read. One of the first poems i've read on this site, and one of my favorites. Where everything is all right— The opposite of ...

Loving the story so far. I like how it turned out to be a man reading a story to his two kids, cute idea, and very intruiging. I'm definatly looking ...

Wow, this was an amazingly powerfull story, full of a deeper meaning as well. I really truly enjoyed reading this. I loved how the daughters roles were switched. And the ...